Disgusted...
DisgustedMinutes agoMy dadSaid four wordsTo me,Four wordsThat made meCry.It wasntWhat he said,It wasThe look he gave.DisgustedFor a momentI sat thereDumbfounded,Unable toComprehendWhat hadJust...
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Very sad. Very emotinal. The repatition of discusted strikes a very powerful chord. Well done....You see in the final anaysis it is between you and god, it was never between you and them anyway.
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Hey you, another deep, emotionally touching read here my friend. Again, I hope the write helps relieve the pain some. (hugs) This whole piece gets ya in the heart hard, a lot of pain in this. The...
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i really enjoyed this piece mystic, well as much as one can when reading a piece so full of pain.i couldn't help but read this piece as a song. perhaps some guitar could be put behind this. hope...
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Lydia~ thanks very much.. i really appreciate it.Mike~ Hi my friend, thank you for your caring words.. you know they always mean a lot to me. Huggs It did help to write, somewhat.. but i think there's...
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